Scene Stealers: The Characters Readers Love
- Heather Burkett-Ocasio
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Every character can't be a main character.
Sometimes, you need sidekicks, friends, family...even animals.
They're supposed to support the story. Pop in, do their job, and politely return the spotlight to the people whose names actually belong on the marquee.
Except sometimes they don't cooperate.
Sometimes a secondary character shows up with entirely too much personality and readers decide, "Nope. I need more of THAT one."
Allow me to introduce you to a few of my favorite scene stealers.
The Peckers Series — Aunt Martha
Peckers was never intended to be a four-part series.
At first, I expected Peckers: The Pact to be a standalone. But Sierra and Roxie demanded equal page time, and they were fleshed out enough that second and third stories made complete sense.
Then there was Aunt Martha.
Martha became far more important than I originally intended. Hell, the woman didn't even have a last name at first!
My beta readers were unanimous, though: Martha mattered.
They wanted...nay, needed...to know more.
And apparently, I agreed.
More eventually became a fourth novella with Martha herself as the leading lady.
Some readers now argue that hers is the most important story in the entire series.
Not bad for a woman who started without a last name.
The Peckers Series - Chuck
Aunt Martha wasn't the only one determined to steal attention in the Peckers series.
Peckers: By Design introduced readers to Chuck the Chameleon.
Technically, "Chuck" is just a nickname.
His full legal name is probably longer than all of his scenes put together—but that hasn't stopped readers from falling in love with him.
He doesn't need many pages.
Apparently, he just needs wonky eyes and a little cast.
Snot Rag & Cheese Whiz - Robbie Bennett
In Snot Rag & Cheese Whiz, Robbie Bennett was the clear frontrunner among my beta readers.
And I get it.
With his playfulness, roughhousing, and oversized man-child energy, Robbie has the kind of personality that naturally demands attention whenever he walks into a scene.
He wasn't there to be the lead.
Nobody bothered to tell Robbie that.
States of Grace - George
My current work in progress, States of Grace, features secondary characters from all over the United States as the story travels from 1969 to 2012.
But no character seems to have quite the same enigmatic pull as George.
At more than 200,000 words, I went into revisions knowing I desperately needed to find scenes I could cut.
My beta readers responded by issuing what amounted to an outright ban:
Don't touch George
Message received.
Now that I'm fully into revisions, I've respected their wishes.
George stays.
States of Grace - Agnes
Then there's one of my personal favorites: a sassy senior woman named Agnes.
On paper, Agnes has a relatively small role in States of Grace.
In the story?
She's anything but small.
Her brief presence has an enormous influence on the main characters, quite literally changing the course of their lives through kindness and love.
Maybe that's what I love most about a great secondary character.
Stories are a lot like life that way.
Not everyone who changes us stays for the whole story.
Some people are with us for decades. Others wander into our lives for a chapter, a scene, or a single moment—and somehow leave us different than they found us.
Maybe that's why readers can become so attached to characters who were never supposed to be the stars.
They don't need the most pages to matter.
Sometimes, they just need to steal the right scene.
Author H.R. Burkett writes fiction about messy people, complicated relationships, and beautifully imperfect lives.
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